Greg's Story Idea: The Entertainer
Outline: There is serial killer on the loose, who takes people hostage, and tries to entertain them. Every time he thinks they aren't enjoying his company (which is every time), he will kill them, sometimes brutally. The police call in Detective Finch Young, a detective who soon realises he knew the killer when he was a kid. He has flashback to when he was young and when he and The Entertainer were best friends. One day The Entertainer, who we find is called Bill Williams, killed a cat when with Finch. This ended their friendship. Finch gets an idea where The Entertainer will go next, and he tells the police about it and decides they should raid it ASAP. However, The Entertainer finds Finch and Katie Loworth, who he met at the police station, and kidnaps them. after an attempt to entertain them, he kills Katie, and almost shoots Finch, but the police get there first and kill him.
Opening: The story opens with The Entertainer trying to entertain Finch and Katie. After realising that they aren't enjoying his performance, he rants about how hard he tries and how they give nothing back. Through this rant we see his insanity. He takes a blunt weapon and beats Katie to death. He then attacks Finch's lower half, forces him up, takes a gun and tells him he has ten seconds to get out my sight. Finch hobbles away as The Entertainer counts from ten. from five, the last shot will be a close up of the side of his face, panning to the gun. The sequence will end when he says one and we see his finger touch the trigger. A gunshot will echo into the next scene.
Outline: There is serial killer on the loose, who takes people hostage, and tries to entertain them. Every time he thinks they aren't enjoying his company (which is every time), he will kill them, sometimes brutally. The police call in Detective Finch Young, a detective who soon realises he knew the killer when he was a kid. He has flashback to when he was young and when he and The Entertainer were best friends. One day The Entertainer, who we find is called Bill Williams, killed a cat when with Finch. This ended their friendship. Finch gets an idea where The Entertainer will go next, and he tells the police about it and decides they should raid it ASAP. However, The Entertainer finds Finch and Katie Loworth, who he met at the police station, and kidnaps them. after an attempt to entertain them, he kills Katie, and almost shoots Finch, but the police get there first and kill him.
Opening: The story opens with The Entertainer trying to entertain Finch and Katie. After realising that they aren't enjoying his performance, he rants about how hard he tries and how they give nothing back. Through this rant we see his insanity. He takes a blunt weapon and beats Katie to death. He then attacks Finch's lower half, forces him up, takes a gun and tells him he has ten seconds to get out my sight. Finch hobbles away as The Entertainer counts from ten. from five, the last shot will be a close up of the side of his face, panning to the gun. The sequence will end when he says one and we see his finger touch the trigger. A gunshot will echo into the next scene.
Bit confused here. Are you not going with the watch idea? Are you working co operatively as a group? You have two ideas. Sort this out ASAP - you can't do anything until you have chosen your plot.
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